Weekend Assignment #66: July 4 Haiku! A 17-syllable holiday poem, please!
Fireworks in the sky
Loudly flashing up above,
Kissing with my love.
Time passes quickly
children running 'round our feet,
laughter our life's beat.
July 4th cook outs
kids challenging baseball fun,
Have the parents won?
We are so lucky
Hearts bursting, a girl, two boys,
Unimagined, joys.
Well, there ya go John! Four haikus as a little story, I hope you enjoy.
Be well
Dawn
5 comments:
Quite the talented wonam there. I struggle for two hours to write ONE and you pop off four! And then string them together to make a story! You should read Karen's entry, she did a similar thing.
http://journals.aol.com/mavarin/MusingsfromMavarin/entries/1870
My one little first attempt is available at my place for your purusal.
http://journals.aol.com/madmanadhd/ConfessionsofaMadmanInsightsinto/entries/1244
very nice
http://journals.aol.com/sinnermeetevil/Myfamily
Nicely done. I like them.
-Paul
http://journals.aol.ca/plittle/AuroraWalkingVacation/
Wow! I used to write poetry, beautiful poetry. Then the brain fog took over and I'm doing good to put standard sentences together.
Hugs,
Susan
alrighty - what is up with all you ubber poets showing the rest of us up? lol http://journals.aol.com/pixiedustnme/Inmyopinion/entries/1142
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